

{"id":12742,"date":"2021-05-11T12:27:37","date_gmt":"2021-05-11T12:27:37","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/?p=12742"},"modified":"2023-03-23T21:24:13","modified_gmt":"2023-03-23T21:24:13","slug":"this-in-turn-comma-usage","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/this-in-turn-comma-usage\/","title":{"rendered":"&#8220;This in turn&#8221; \u2014 Comma Usage Rules Explained in Great Detail"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Although one of the main functions of commas is to introduce more clarity into a sentence, sometimes it can feel like they just exist to make writing more confusing!<\/p>\n<p>One reason for this is that you may learn a comma rule and then see writing that breaks it, even printed in newspapers, magazines and books.<\/p>\n<p>The reason for this is that some <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/comma-rules\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">comma rules<\/a><\/strong> are more flexible than others. The rule about commas and the phrase &ldquo;this in turn&rdquo; is flexible.<br>\n&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h2>How are commas used with &ldquo;this in turn&rdquo;?<\/h2>\n<p><strong>As a general rule, you need a comma after &ldquo;this&rdquo; and after &ldquo;turn&rdquo; in the phrase &ldquo;this in turn.&rdquo; &ldquo;In turn&rdquo; is a nonessential phrase, so it should be set off from the rest of the sentence by commas. However, if the absence of the commas doesn&rsquo;t affect the sentence&rsquo;s clarity, you may leave them out.<\/strong><br>\n&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h2>&ldquo;This in turn&rdquo; with commas<\/h2>\n<p>&ldquo;This in turn&rdquo; shows a relationship of both time and cause and <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/no-effect-vs-no-affect\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">effect<\/a><\/strong> between one sentence or part of a sentence and the next.<\/p>\n<p>It may come as the second half of a sentence if the first half of the sentence is about the thing that happened first.<\/p>\n<p>If the previous sentence is about the thing that happened first, it usually comes at the beginning of the next sentence.<br>\n&nbsp;<br>\n&ldquo;This&rdquo; is usually the subject, and it refers to the incident from the previous sentence or the earlier part of the sentence.<\/p>\n<p>&ldquo;In turn&rdquo; is a nonessential phrase that comes in between the subject and <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/intransitive-verbs\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">verb<\/a><\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>Because nonessential phrases are supposed to be set apart from the rest of the sentence with commas, it has commas around it.<\/p>\n<p>While the phrase &ldquo;in turn&rdquo; emphasizes the relationship of this sentence or part of the sentence to what has come before, it could be removed without affecting the sentence&rsquo;s meaning.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3>&ldquo;This in turn&rdquo; at the beginning of a sentence<\/h3>\n<p>In the examples below, you can see the relationship of the second sentence, which begins with &ldquo;this in turn,&rdquo; to the first.<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">Lia was behind on all her homework. This, in turn, led to her falling further behind in understanding the material.<\/div><\/div>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The ground was frozen, so we scattered seed for the birds. This, in turn, helped them get through the cold winter.<\/div><\/div>\n<p>Notice that if you take &ldquo;in turn&rdquo; out of one of these sentences, it does not change the meaning, <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/comma-before-after-so\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">so<\/a><\/strong> you know that it is nonessential:<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">This led to her falling further behind in understanding the material.<\/div><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3>&ldquo;This in turn&rdquo; in the middle of a sentence<\/h3>\n<p>&ldquo;This in turn&rdquo; might also come in the middle of a sentence to show the relationship of the second part of the sentence with the first part.<\/p>\n<p>Notice that in the sentence below, there is a semicolon before &ldquo;this&rdquo; because you are joining two separate sentences:<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">She threw more matches onto the coals; this, in turn, ignited the flames.<\/div><\/div>\n<p>You can join two sentences using a comma, but there has to be a conjunction with it as well. Therefore, you would never have a comma before &ldquo;this&rdquo; because it needs to come before the connecting conjunction.<\/p>\n<p>You can see that is the case in the sentences below:<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The wind blew hard across the water, and this, in turn, caused the sails to unfurl.<\/div><\/div>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The man kept telling her jokes, and it was this, in turn, that finally cheered her up.<\/div><\/div>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The dog tried to dig under the fence, but this, in turn, only exhausted him. <\/div><\/div>\n&nbsp;\n<h2>&ldquo;This in turn&rdquo; without commas<\/h2>\n<p>If you want to make sure that you are always correct, you can put commas around &ldquo;in turn&rdquo; as in the examples above.<\/p>\n<p>However, as long as the clarity of the sentence is not affected, this is partly a matter of style.<\/p>\n<p>Some style guides and organizations emphasize using as few commas as possible, and some people simply prefer to use fewer commas too.<\/p>\n<p>Even when commas are not used for clarity, they can be used to indicate a pause in a sentence. You might want to remove commas to eliminate this pause:<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The basement flooded. This in turn meant our back yard flooded too.<\/div><\/div>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">We stayed out all night, and this in turn caused Claudia to worry about us.<\/div><\/div>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">It has not rained much in the past six months; this in turn means the ground is very dry.<\/div><\/div>\n<p>Commas when used to indicate a pause can help add emphasis.<\/p>\n<p>In the <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/comma-after-for-example\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">example<\/a><\/strong> above about the flooded basement, you can add commas if you really want to drive the point home that your basement flooded.<\/p>\n<p>To better <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/thank-you-for-your-understanding\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">understand<\/a><\/strong> the difference, it may help to reread the sentence out loud both with and without commas:<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The basement flooded. This in turn meant our back yard flooded too.<\/div><\/div>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">The basement flooded. This, in turn, meant our back yard flooded too.<\/div><\/div>\n<p>Do you hear the <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/thats-vs-that-s\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">difference<\/a><\/strong>?<\/p>\n<p>The sentence without the commas might be one that you use when the flooded back yard is only the beginning of your troubles.<\/p>\n<p>Without commas, there is a feel of greater urgency and faster speech in the sentence and a suggestion that you might go on to mention other things that went wrong as well. For example, you might add:<\/p>\n<div class=\"su-note\" style=\"border-color:#e5e54c;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\"><div class=\"su-note-inner su-u-clearfix su-u-trim\" style=\"background-color:#FFFF66;border-color:#ffffff;color:#333333;border-radius:3px;-moz-border-radius:3px;-webkit-border-radius:3px;\">And then the water started coming in the backdoor. Soon there was a foot of water on the first floor!<\/div><\/div>\n<p>In the second example, with the commas, the climax of the story might be that the back yard flooded, so you might deliver this news a little bit more slowly with the commas to help you for emphasis on &ldquo;in turn.&rdquo;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Although one of the main functions of commas is to introduce more clarity into a sentence, sometimes it can feel like they just exist to make writing more confusing! One reason for this is that you may learn a comma rule and then see writing that breaks it, even printed in newspapers, magazines and books. &hellip;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":12750,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"disable-in-feed":false,"article-schema-type":"Article","disable-critical-css":false,"_convertkit_action_broadcast_export":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[35,1119,1116],"tags":[80,569],"class_list":["post-12742","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-english","category-comma-rules","category-grammar","tag-comma","tag-this-in-turn"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/12742","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=12742"}],"version-history":[{"count":12,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/12742\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":23551,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/12742\/revisions\/23551"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/12750"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=12742"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=12742"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/linguaholic.com\/linguablog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=12742"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}