Uan
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Ich mag Das Revolverheld, die AnnenMayKanterei, Adel Tawil. die Toten Hosen, die Soehne Mannheims..
Wenn ich an der Universitaet war, hat mein Lehrer verschiedene Saenger euren hoeren gemacht!
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4 hours ago, linguaholic said:
The first sentence is correct. However, you could omit the second 'ich' to make the sentence even more elegant. So you could say:
Ich heisse Verdiana und komme aus Italien.
Actually, the same holds true for the second sentence. You don't need that second 'Îch', as the subject of the sentence is still the same (you!). So just say: ich bin 22 Jahre alt und habe Deutsch für 2 Jahre an der Universität studiert.
Instead of Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, you should say Ich 'möchte' mein Deutsch verbessern, as you should use a modal verb in the present tense here. The full sentence should be like:
Ich möchte mein Deutsch verbessern und möchte es vor allem nicht vergessen!
Oh, as for the second sentence. The thing in parentheses should be changed into (23 im Dezember). So you should replace the preposition am with 'in'.
As for the stuff in parentheses in the first sentence, it sounds a little bit weird. It is grammatically correct, but a native speaker wouldn't say (Sardinien im Detail). You could simply put (Sardinien). That would be more natural.
Regards
L
Oh, yes! Wollte is Praeteritum!! The grammatic is the worst part of German (and all others languages!)
So, it's important don't repeat the subject if it is the same in the same period, but I must repeat the verb (as in "Ich moechte..."), also if it is the same!
Oh, for the last sentence: "im Detail" it's never used, or just in particular cases?
Thanks a lot!
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14 hours ago, linguaholic said:
Dear Uan
Nice to meet you! I am from Switzerland and I am happy to help you to improve your German. Do you mind if make some corrections to your introduction text? Most of it is really good, though. You are already on a good level! Well done
Best wishes
Lingua
Yes, sure! Corrections are the best solution to improve myself!
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Hallo!
Ich heiße Verdiana und ich komme aus Italien (Sardinien im Detail).
Ich bin 22 Jahre alt (23 am Dezember), und habe ich Deutsch and der Universität für 2 Jahre studiert!
Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, und es vor allem nicht vergessern!
Lasst uns zusammen Deutsch lernen!
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Ok, ich habe verstanden!