Zekko Posted January 6, 2020 Report Share Posted January 6, 2020 Hello there As title suggests, I need some help with my haiku. I'm pretty new to Japanese so I could use some help with it. I decided to make it to surprise someone special to me since they also love Japan and Japanese culture and I've alredy wrote it with help of multiple sites but I just wanted to know if, from grammatical perspective, it is any good. I know that there are some things missing (5th on in last line for example) but I just need a general opinion about "matching words" correctly. 優しい風 いい雛菊や と貴方 gentle breeze peaceful daisies and you Thank you in advance! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇崎ちゃん Posted March 16, 2020 Report Share Posted March 16, 2020 Rule number 1: don't bother with grammar in a haiku, it's not meant to be on par with grammar of every day Japanese any way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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