KittyKats 0 Posted December 1, 2020 Report Share Posted December 1, 2020 Hello, everyone! I'm pitching a children's picturebook and extremely need your help with a proper title. It's going to be a Christmas story based around the Nice and Naughty list. My versions: 1. The Story of the Nice Platypus and the Naughty Duck. 2. The Story of Nice Platypus and Naughty Duck. Would really appreciate any help! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
宇崎ちゃん 140 Posted December 1, 2020 Report Share Posted December 1, 2020 6 hours ago, KittyKats said: children's picturebook 6 hours ago, KittyKats said: extremely I don't think an extreme children's picturebook would be suitable. Jokes aside, you don't really provide any examples of your book, the title seems rather generic if you ask me both ways. If the question is about with or without "the", I'd say: ・If Nice and Naughty are the names of the characters, no "the". ・If Nice and Naughty are titles to describe the characters, with "the". Quote Link to post Share on other sites
KittyKats 0 Posted December 2, 2020 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2020 5 hours ago, 宇崎ちゃん said: I don't think an extreme children's picturebook would be suitable. Jokes aside, you don't really provide any examples of your book, the title seems rather generic if you ask me both ways. If the question is about with or without "the", I'd say: ・If Nice and Naughty are the names of the characters, no "the". ・If Nice and Naughty are titles to describe the characters, with "the". Several years of learning English and still have problems with using articles. Thanks a bunch for the explanation! ❤️ Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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