Roman

Hi everyone! I`m from Russia and I practice writing lyrics for my songs. Can anyone check this out? Is it grammatically ok? When I grow up I will be on my way I`ll drive my car I want be far away From burning city, from my past and broken dreams I`m sorry for the letter that I sent to you I can't forgive you after all things we`ve been through Betrayal crashing all the bridges that we made