laravium

Hello :-) I need some help using the correct grammar for this sentence I want to say: 私にとって、医学を勉強することは難しいようですから、お医者になりたくて、人助けをしたいことは素晴らしいと思います。 I want the meaning to be something similar to "For me, studying medicine seems difficult, which is why I think it is awesome, that you want to become a doctor and help people." Is this sentence grammatically correct like that? Especially the middle part seems weird to me, I'd be glad if someone could help me :-)