I might be a poet but I don't know it

[schnahz]

Hi all,

I concocted the following lines to help me increase my vocabulary using rhyme as a memory aid. The question is: is it a valid chinese sentence or can the rhyme be improved?

你 可以 靶 你 的 方法 吗 ？

Ni3 ke3yi3 ba3 ni3 de xue2xi2fang1fa3 ma?

Can you choose your study methods?

 

Thank you, schnahz

Edited January 2, 2017 by schnahz
I added characters