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Hi there, I'm struggling with a sentence. It just doesn't sound right. 

Our first finding was that well mastered OCS skills at a young age (6 years) will have a higher association compared to at the age of 9, to the application of these skills at older ages in more complex environments.

My first worry is ...higher association ...to the application

My second issue is that the sentence is difficult to read. 

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It means, if the OCS skills (not sure what it is) are mastered earlier, then when these kids grow up, their skills are more relevant or (simply) more useful in a complex environment.

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