Hello! I'm a native Italian and I must admit that you wrote a good essay. I want to say to you some tips to correct your document. First, everytime you start a new sentence, you should put a space between the first word and the previous period. Same process after a comma. Then, there is a word near "non è semplice esaminare sotto il profilo giuridico il marchio "Made in Italy", which is "basa". That's wrong, the right one is "basata", which is our past participle. In general, it's a very good essay. You wrote much better than many italians! However, is this a C1/C2 writing exam in italian? By the way, in bocca al lupo per il tuo esame e spero che tu raggiunga l'obiettivo che ti sei prefissato!