KittyKats Posted December 1, 2020 Report Share Posted December 1, 2020 Hello, everyone! I'm pitching a children's picturebook and extremely need your help with a proper title. It's going to be a Christmas story based around the Nice and Naughty list. My versions: 1. The Story of the Nice Platypus and the Naughty Duck. 2. The Story of Nice Platypus and Naughty Duck. Would really appreciate any help! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇崎ちゃん Posted December 1, 2020 Report Share Posted December 1, 2020 6 hours ago, KittyKats said: children's picturebook 6 hours ago, KittyKats said: extremely I don't think an extreme children's picturebook would be suitable. Jokes aside, you don't really provide any examples of your book, the title seems rather generic if you ask me both ways. If the question is about with or without "the", I'd say: ・If Nice and Naughty are the names of the characters, no "the". ・If Nice and Naughty are titles to describe the characters, with "the". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyKats Posted December 2, 2020 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2020 5 hours ago, 宇崎ちゃん said: I don't think an extreme children's picturebook would be suitable. Jokes aside, you don't really provide any examples of your book, the title seems rather generic if you ask me both ways. If the question is about with or without "the", I'd say: ・If Nice and Naughty are the names of the characters, no "the". ・If Nice and Naughty are titles to describe the characters, with "the". Several years of learning English and still have problems with using articles. Thanks a bunch for the explanation! ❤️ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarryNilson2 Posted December 13, 2021 Report Share Posted December 13, 2021 I think if you yourself wrote the book, then you should name it! After a year, you will be proud of it) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MichelleVince3 Posted December 31, 2021 Report Share Posted December 31, 2021 Here you need to think carefully. This is the most important thing that may be, a lot will depend on the name. These 2 options are too easy. I recently read essays on My Last Duchess, I used the great site for this. Here the name is perfect, it sounds loud and is remembered for a long time. It is better to sit for a month over the title of the book, for then there will be something to be proud of. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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