C_Decora Posted October 2, 2015 Report Posted October 2, 2015 So I saw this a while back, and the user that created it before referred to an instance before his/hers, and I thought this would actually be a great practice. However contrary to last time, to make this experience more productive, I hope with each new addition to the story, that we look over the piece posted before ours and make any corrections or give any pointers as necessary. The purpose of this forum is to better our English but the writing in the last thread was still a bit lacking, I think. So for those who haven't "played" before, you simply build/add onto the story sentence by sentence, keeping in mind that your addition should be coherent to what came before you. There is an earlier example, as well, if you go back to the forum and scroll down. So shall we begin?It had been raining all day, but it isn't anymore. R34Linguist 1 Quote
Trellum Posted October 4, 2015 Report Posted October 4, 2015 Finally the sun shines again, and a soft and cool breeze can be felt, the summer has already gone and with it all the... Quote
xTinx Posted October 21, 2015 Report Posted October 21, 2015 ... great memories of youthful frivolities which I presume will continue to stay with me until whenever. Quote
anna3101 Posted October 27, 2015 Report Posted October 27, 2015 This summer was special and I will remember it forever because... Quote
czarina84 Posted October 27, 2015 Report Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) ...that was when my life changed forever. Not to break the mood of the story, but, Trellum, you kind of created a run-on sentence. I love the words you used. Your wording was beautiful. To fix the grammar, you just need to replace the comma after "felt" with a period and capitalized the word "the". Edited October 27, 2015 by czarina84 forgot a comma Quote
foolsgold Posted October 27, 2015 Report Posted October 27, 2015 I had met him at the corner of 2nd and 5th Avenue where I was waiting for a taxi cab. He... Quote
takibari Posted February 7, 2016 Report Posted February 7, 2016 ... was standing a few steps away and stealing glances at me. Oddly, I ... Quote
R34Linguist Posted February 7, 2016 Report Posted February 7, 2016 ...looked away and hastily got into the cab as soon as it arrived. Quote
anna3101 Posted February 8, 2016 Report Posted February 8, 2016 The cab driver turned to me and said Quote
VinayaSpeaks Posted May 25, 2016 Report Posted May 25, 2016 "Where do you want to go?" I jerked, I wanted to go nowhere, I was just avoiding him. Quote
sidney Posted June 1, 2016 Report Posted June 1, 2016 So I stormed out of the taxi and waited for another one... Quote
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