Jay Posted June 10, 2016 Report Share Posted June 10, 2016 Hello! It would be very nice if someone corrected this letter °^°! Thanks! Hello Peter! While I was surfing the internet, I accidentaly found your website. There are some interesting informations. I think that skydiving must be fantastic. It’s like flying, isn’t it? Would you mind to answer some questions? First of all, I would like to know if everyone can go skydiving. What are the skills I need to go skydiving? And additionally it’d be interesting to how long you have been doing this activity. By the way, I also really enjoy biking even if it’s not a mountain bike. I don’t do as much sport as you do but I hope I’ll find the time to do. Have a nice day, Jay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇崎ちゃん Posted June 11, 2016 Report Share Posted June 11, 2016 (edited) Quote Hello Peter! While I was browsing the internet, I incidentally found your website. You have some interesting information. I think skydiving is fantastic. It’s like flying, isn’t it? Would you mind to answer some questions? First of all, I would like to know if everyone can go skydiving. What are the skills required to go skydiving?Additionally, I’d be interested to know how long you have been doing this. By the way, I also really enjoy bicycling, even though it’s no mountain bike. I don’t perform sports as much as you do, but I hope I’ll find the time to do so. Have a nice day, Jay Tip: your letter sounds friendly. But if it were a business letter, always omit words like "it's", "isn't", "it'd", etc. I don't know why, it's just the way it works. Edited June 11, 2016 by Blaveloper Typo. Jay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted June 11, 2016 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2016 Thank you very much (;! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverserewind Posted June 23, 2016 Report Share Posted June 23, 2016 On 10.06.2016 at 3:56 AM, Jay said: Hello Peter! While I was surfing the internet, I accidentaly found your website. There are some interesting informations. I think that skydiving must be fantastic. It’s like flying, isn’t it? Would you mind to answer some questions? First of all, I would like to know if everyone can go skydiving. What are the skills I need to go skydiving? And additionally it’d be interesting to how long you have been doing this activity. By the way, I also really enjoy biking even if it’s not a mountain bike. I don’t do as much sport as you do but I hope I’ll find the time to do. Have a nice day, Jay. 1. Information is always singular 2. I'd say "would you mind answering" 3. For how long have you been doing anything? / How long have you been doing anything for? 4. I'm hoping to find some spare/leisure time for doing so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Snort Posted June 25, 2016 Report Share Posted June 25, 2016 Hello, Peter, [You need to have a comma after any salutation and for a business letter, a comma after the name of the person the letter is addressed to ( always recommended)]. While surfing the internet, I accidentally found your website. It's got some interesting information [or some other variation. Information is an uncountable noun] and for that reason doesn't have a plural form]. I think that skydiving must be fantastic . . . would you mind answering some questions? [mind always is followed by -ing when it is followed by a verb]. That's about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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