lookforuu Posted July 30, 2013 Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 If you are learning Chinese language, maybe you could write something hear (within 150 words), I would have a look and give some correction or advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deen the breen Posted July 31, 2013 Report Share Posted July 31, 2013 你们好我向大家介绍一下我家里有什么人。我家有四口人。妈妈，爸爸，弟弟，和我。我的妈妈是德国人。她在西门四公司工作。她的工作很忙。天天工作，每天回来得很晚。实际上，我的爸爸是法国人。他这年四十五岁。 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deen the breen Posted August 3, 2013 Report Share Posted August 3, 2013 could you have a look at it lookforuu ?cheers! :angel: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lookforuu Posted August 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2013 你们好我向大家介绍一下我家里有什么人。Better to say 我的家人我家有四口人。妈妈，爸爸，弟弟，和我。我的妈妈是德国人。她在西门四公司工作。她的工作很忙。天天工作，每天回来得很晚。实际上，我的爸爸是法国人。他这年四十五岁。 usually 爸爸 comes first, then 妈妈. If you mean siemens then in Chinese people call it 西门子。in this case it's better to say 今年 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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