Write some Chinese sentences here by your own, I will give some advice.

[lookforuu]

If you are learning Chinese language, maybe you could write something hear (within 150 words), I would have a look and give some correction or advice.

[deen the breen]

你们好

我向大家介绍一下我家里有什么人。

我家有四口人。妈妈，爸爸，弟弟，和我。我的妈妈是德国人。她在西门四公司工作。她的工作很忙。天天工作，每天回来得很晚。实际上，我的爸爸是法国人。他这年四十五岁。

[deen the breen]

could you have a look at it lookforuu ?

cheers!  :angel:

[lookforuu]

  On 7/31/2013 at 5:58 AM, deen the breen said:

你们好

我向大家介绍一下我家里有什么人。Better to say 我的家人

我家有四口人。妈妈，爸爸，弟弟，和我。我的妈妈是德国人。她在西门四公司工作。她的工作很忙。天天工作，每天回来得很晚。实际上，我的爸爸是法国人。他这年四十五岁。

usually 爸爸 comes first, then 妈妈. If you mean siemens then in Chinese people call it 西门子。in this case it's better to say 今年