x0xLucyMx0x Posted September 19, 2016 Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 Guten Acht! Ich heiße Luisa und Ich komme aus Estland. Ich lernt Deutsch für 1 Jahre in Gymnasium und es ist nicht gut. Dann Ich war keine Zeit für Deutsch lernen. Ich erinnere mich aus Lektion nur Phrasen wie: Wie geht es? Wollen wir ins Kino gehen? Das Hun mit Reis Das ist alle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Cat Posted September 29, 2016 Report Share Posted September 29, 2016 "Das Huhn mit Reis" Lustig, dass du dich gerade daran erinnerst. Aber dein deutsch ist sehr gut dafür, dass du es nur 1 Jahr hattest! (Übrigens: Es heißt "Guten Tag", "acht" heißt 8.^^) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uan Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Hallo! Ich heiße Verdiana und ich komme aus Italien (Sardinien im Detail). Ich bin 22 Jahre alt (23 am Dezember), und habe ich Deutsch and der Universität für 2 Jahre studiert! Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, und es vor allem nicht vergessern! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linguaholic Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 8 hours ago, Uan said: Hallo! Ich heiße Verdiana und ich komme aus Italien (Sardinien im Detail). Ich bin 22 Jahre alt (23 am Dezember), und habe ich Deutsch and der Universität für 2 Jahre studiert! Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, und es vor allem nicht vergessern! Dear Uan Nice to meet you! I am from Switzerland and I am happy to help you to improve your German. Do you mind if make some corrections to your introduction text? Most of it is really good, though. You are already on a good level! Well done Best wishes Lingua Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uan Posted November 13, 2016 Report Share Posted November 13, 2016 14 hours ago, linguaholic said: Dear Uan Nice to meet you! I am from Switzerland and I am happy to help you to improve your German. Do you mind if make some corrections to your introduction text? Most of it is really good, though. You are already on a good level! Well done Best wishes Lingua Yes, sure! Corrections are the best solution to improve myself! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linguaholic Posted November 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2016 On 12.11.2016 at 0:45 PM, Uan said: Hallo! Ich heiße Verdiana und ich komme aus Italien (Sardinien im Detail). Ich bin 22 Jahre alt (23 am Dezember), und habe ich Deutsch and der Universität für 2 Jahre studiert! Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, und es vor allem nicht vergessern! The first sentence is correct. However, you could omit the second 'ich' to make the sentence even more elegant. So you could say: Ich heisse Verdiana und komme aus Italien. Actually, the same holds true for the second sentence. You don't need that second 'Îch', as the subject of the sentence is still the same (you!). So just say: ich bin 22 Jahre alt und habe Deutsch für 2 Jahre an der Universität studiert. Instead of Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, you should say Ich 'möchte' mein Deutsch verbessern, as you should use a modal verb in the present tense here. The full sentence should be like: Ich möchte mein Deutsch verbessern und möchte es vor allem nicht vergessen! Oh, as for the second sentence. The thing in parentheses should be changed into (23 im Dezember). So you should replace the preposition am with 'in'. As for the stuff in parentheses in the first sentence, it sounds a little bit weird. It is grammatically correct, but a native speaker wouldn't say (Sardinien im Detail). You could simply put (Sardinien). That would be more natural. Regards L Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uan Posted November 14, 2016 Report Share Posted November 14, 2016 4 hours ago, linguaholic said: The first sentence is correct. However, you could omit the second 'ich' to make the sentence even more elegant. So you could say: Ich heisse Verdiana und komme aus Italien. Actually, the same holds true for the second sentence. You don't need that second 'Îch', as the subject of the sentence is still the same (you!). So just say: ich bin 22 Jahre alt und habe Deutsch für 2 Jahre an der Universität studiert. Instead of Ich wollte mein Deutsch verbessern, you should say Ich 'möchte' mein Deutsch verbessern, as you should use a modal verb in the present tense here. The full sentence should be like: Ich möchte mein Deutsch verbessern und möchte es vor allem nicht vergessen! Oh, as for the second sentence. The thing in parentheses should be changed into (23 im Dezember). So you should replace the preposition am with 'in'. As for the stuff in parentheses in the first sentence, it sounds a little bit weird. It is grammatically correct, but a native speaker wouldn't say (Sardinien im Detail). You could simply put (Sardinien). That would be more natural. Regards L Oh, yes! Wollte is Praeteritum!! The grammatic is the worst part of German (and all others languages!) So, it's important don't repeat the subject if it is the same in the same period, but I must repeat the verb (as in "Ich moechte..."), also if it is the same! Oh, for the last sentence: "im Detail" it's never used, or just in particular cases? Thanks a lot! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linguaholic Posted November 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2016 14 minutes ago, Uan said: Oh, yes! Wollte is Praeteritum!! The grammatic is the worst part of German (and all others languages!) So, it's important don't repeat the subject if it is the same in the same period, but I must repeat the verb (as in "Ich moechte..."), also if it is the same! Oh, for the last sentence: "im Detail" it's never used, or just in particular cases? Thanks a lot! Actually the second 'möchte' is also not mandatory. It would be possible also to omit it. But in my opinion in this case it sounds more elegant to repeat it. In the case of 'Ich' as in the sentence where you used it twice, it really sounds weird if you do so. As for the 'im Detail', it is possible in some contexts, but I would say that often it would be used in a more formal sentence (context) and it makes more sense to use it together with some nouns than others (can't think of a specific rule though.). Let me give you an example where 'im Detail' would make more sense: You could say that you would like to look at something in more detail for instance: Ich möchte mir deine Arbeit im Detail anschauen. It really depends on the context and the noun you are specifying with the phrase 'im Detail'. Uan 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uan Posted November 14, 2016 Report Share Posted November 14, 2016 Ok, ich habe verstanden! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
armitur Posted November 28, 2017 Report Share Posted November 28, 2017 Hallo, zusammen Ich heiße Fern und ich bin eine Malaysianerin. Ich studiere jetzt im Gymnasium. Freut mich Sie kennenzulernen! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linguaholic Posted November 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2017 19 hours ago, armitur said: Hallo, zusammen Ich heiße Fern und ich bin eine Malaysianerin. Ich studiere jetzt im Gymnasium. Freut mich Sie kennenzulernen! Hallo Armitur Freut mich sehr, dass du mein Forum gefunden hast. Falls ich Dir beim Deutsch lernen weiterhelfen kann, gib mir einfach Bescheid. Beste Grüße Lingua Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
armitur Posted November 29, 2017 Report Share Posted November 29, 2017 2 hours ago, linguaholic said: Hallo Armitur Freut mich sehr, dass du mein Forum gefunden hast. Falls ich Dir beim Deutsch lernen weiterhelfen kann, gib mir einfach Bescheid. Beste Grüße Lingua Dankeschön! Das wird ich tun. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linguaholic Posted November 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2017 On 29.11.2017 at 10:35 AM, armitur said: Dankeschön! Das wird ich tun. klar. Gibst du mir einfach Bescheid. LG Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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