Eudora13 Posted November 30, 2013 Report Posted November 30, 2013 I read the previous thread where each one added a line to create a story. It was really interesting to read, starting from a happy picture, through tragedy, morbid, funny, to downright bizarre! So here's another one..not a fairy tale beginning, perhaps not a beginning at all, but let's see where it goes! I was alone at home last Sunday, with the alert of the storm upon us, when the stranger came knocking at our door. Quote
Firelily99 Posted November 30, 2013 Report Posted November 30, 2013 He looked like someone out of the pages of a murder mystery with his dark rumpled overcoat and the scruffy beginnings of a new beard. Quote
Kotro Posted November 30, 2013 Report Posted November 30, 2013 He didn't say anything. He just stood there, almost looking right through me. He seemed surprised, like he was expecting someone else to have opened the door. Quote
caparica007 Posted December 3, 2013 Report Posted December 3, 2013 I said to him, hello, can I help you? :wacky: Quote
SpiralArchitect Posted December 3, 2013 Report Posted December 3, 2013 I am not sure you can, he replied and took out an old picture from his pocket. Quote
Kotro Posted December 3, 2013 Report Posted December 3, 2013 I took the picture. It was an old black and white of a girl smiling at the camera. Didn't look like anyone I could have known. Outside the wind was rising, the picture flickering in my hand. Quote
LauraM Posted December 3, 2013 Report Posted December 3, 2013 He took the picture back from me, and gazed at it. "This is a picture of my daughter...five years ago. It's the only picture of her that I have." He paused and, then, in a voice I could barely hear, he said, "Yes, it's been that long since I last saw her." Quote
Denis Hard Posted December 4, 2013 Report Posted December 4, 2013 "You came to the right place," I said, "come right in. I think I've heard something about a missing girl."I stepped back, careful to conceal the bathtub full of ice where the carcass of the last unlucky person who visited my den was lying. The man hesitated."Do I smell something?" He asked. Quote
caparica007 Posted December 4, 2013 Report Posted December 4, 2013 "Yes, I am cooking diner but it's not turning out the way I wanted", he said. Quote
calticitron Posted December 4, 2013 Report Posted December 4, 2013 "Alright", he said.He took a step past the door, but the pungent odor must have registered in his senses as he suddenly looked horrified. Quote
SpiralArchitect Posted December 7, 2013 Report Posted December 7, 2013 "I am sorry I haven't introduced myself. My name is Joe Johns." said the old man stepping in.The name seemed familiar and there was something weird about how quickly the look of horror disappeared from his face. But I ignored that, you come across a lot of weird people when your hobbies are as strange as mine. Quote
Kotro Posted December 7, 2013 Report Posted December 7, 2013 We went into the living room. I pointed to the couch."Do take a seat, Mr. Johns. I was about to make some tea. Will you have some?" Quote
Firelily99 Posted December 9, 2013 Report Posted December 9, 2013 He nodded his slowly, never once taking his eyes off of the photo of his daughter. Quote
SpiralArchitect Posted December 10, 2013 Report Posted December 10, 2013 I went to the kitchen and started going through the drawers. There were all kinds of knives there but I was partial to the butcher's knives myself. They got the job done quickly, although it was sad how cleanly they did the job. Quote
Kotro Posted December 10, 2013 Report Posted December 10, 2013 I held a cup of tea on my right hand, the butcher's knife on my left behind my back. I could hear the wind howling and felt a draft, I must have left an window open. It was beginning to rain outside, the storm was almost upon us. I entered the living room. Mr. Johns was gone. Quote
Wanderer Posted December 14, 2013 Report Posted December 14, 2013 He did however leave the picture of his daughter on the coffee table. With it was a pre-typed note that read: "If you happen to see or hear anything about my daughter, please go to the pub on the corner of 5th and Main. I have practically lived there since she has been gone. If I'm not there, Barney the bartender will know how to find me." Quote
Firelily99 Posted December 14, 2013 Report Posted December 14, 2013 Still, I felt a sense of unease that was heightened by the wind driven creaking and groaning of my house. Quote
Bob Posted December 14, 2013 Report Posted December 14, 2013 I set my knife down on the table and sat down, picking up the picture and staring at it. All of a sudden, I had an epiphany. The girl in the picture came knocking on my door five years ago. Quote
Kotro Posted December 14, 2013 Report Posted December 14, 2013 She looked younger in the picture, and the faux black & white effect almost fooled me, but it was definitely her. Looked like one of those selfies kids put on the Internet. She didn't smile as much when I first met her, alone at that park in front of Town Hall. How could I've forgoten her face? How could I forgot the girl who got away? And, most important, how did her father happen to come by my door? Quote
charahome Posted December 21, 2013 Report Posted December 21, 2013 I sat and wondered. I drifted into the memory of our first encounter. That awful night. The rain was relentless and the road was dangerous. I was driving down the road. All of a sudden, there she was. Standing in the rain. She looked beautiful under the street light. Her face seemed like the beauty only angels have. Quote
Daimashin Posted December 23, 2013 Report Posted December 23, 2013 I stopped my car next to her and offered to give her a ride. "It's raining cats and dogs, come, hop on and I'll give you a ride." I said to her on that fateful encounter. Quote
Kotro Posted December 24, 2013 Report Posted December 24, 2013 "Do you have anyplace to go?", I asked her. She nodded a negative. "Is it okay if I take you to my place, to dry you up?". She nodded yes.I drove on to my house, my mind racing with anticipation. A sad lost girl with nowhere to go - the perfect victim. Quote
True2marie Posted December 24, 2013 Report Posted December 24, 2013 What I didn't know is this girl had secret. She was a master of marshal arts trained to be an assassin. Quote
Daimashin Posted December 25, 2013 Report Posted December 25, 2013 But that didn't deter me as I was actually her master that trained her when she was still a little girl. Quote
Firelily99 Posted December 26, 2013 Report Posted December 26, 2013 Physically he wasn't there but I still had an uneasy feeling that he was nearby. The wind howled through the open window, causing my steaming tea cup to rattle in the saucer. Despite the sharp knife in my hand I felt very vulnerable and unsettled. Quote
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